Feedback - Double Page Spread Flat Plan

Feedback Double Page Spread

I really like the design, and I think the geometric layout look really good and fits with the theme.

I think that the main focus of the double page spread should be the article rather than the triangular design, but I think that it looks good and is easy to read.

The design fits the genre quite well and attracts the audience to the page and the article. I also like the design of the page but I think the design takes up too much space on the page.